老师最想看到的英语作文4种开头、结尾以及常用句型!

发布于 2021-11-05 14:59 ,所属分类:中小学英语考试学习资料


其实英语作文的写作并不难,主要考察的是写作的规范性而不是像语文一样考察立意,所以只要开头和结尾符合文体规范,中间再加上一些特殊句型,保证你的作文分不会低~





英语写作文的步骤

要经过一审、二写、三连、四改四步:

一审”即审题:主要是看清楚题目要求,读懂题目所表达的含义,抓住要点,注意文体是什么,准备写作的人称和时态:如果是日记和故事,宜采用过去时态;如是简介之类的,宜采用现在时态。

“二写”即列纲:主要是列个提纲,考虑所要选用的单词、词组、句型,要能根据自己的英语水平,尽量扬长避短,避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句时,就用同(近)义词或同义句代替,不要使用没有把握的词句,并且要综合考虑所涉及到的情景、场合,语言要地道。

“三连”即连句成文:根据短文的内容要求,确定先写什么,后写什么,按照表述内容的情节发展和实际需要,重新排列组合已写成的句子,划分必要的段落,一般分成三段。但要注意句式的灵活运用,长、短句,简单句,复合句要搭配运用。

“四改”即修改润色全文:主要是看全文符不符合题目要求,行文是否流畅,有没有遗漏要点;语法是不是正确,包括单词的拼写、大小写、标点符号、时态、语态、单复数、主谓一致、冠词等。

*总之做到
三审:体裁、时态、人称;
三思:词汇—>短语—>句式;
三查:要点、拼写和语法、连贯

文章分3段:
(1)综述:概括性强,最多2句话引入主题;
(2)正文——主要内容:层次性强,一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面,每个方面最多2句话;
(3)结尾:紧扣主题,2句话内结束,尽量升华。






好作文开头的四种方式

1. “开门见山”式开头
一般来说,文章的开头应尽量做到“开门见山”,即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题,使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。

① 对于叙事类的文章,可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。

如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头可以是:Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.

② 对于论述性的文章,可以在开头处先阐明自己的观点,接着展开进一步的论述。

如“The Time and the Money (时间和金钱)” 的开头可以是:Most people say that money is more important than time. But I don’t think so. First, when money is used up, you can earn it back, but……

2. 回忆性开头
在描述事件或游记类的文章中,采用回忆性的开头往往更能吸引人的眼球。这种类型的开头中通常含有描述自己心情或情绪的词汇,如never forget(永远无法忘记)、 remember (记得)、unforgettable(难以忘怀的)、 exciting(令人激动的)、surprising(令人惊讶的)、sad (难过的)……

如“A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头还以这样写:I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan. 或It was really an unforgettable experience I had.

3. 疑问性开头
在叙事类或论述性的文章中,都可采用疑问型开头,这样既可以吸引阅卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。

如“Planting Trees(种树)”的开头可以是:Have you ever planted trees? Don’t you think planting trees is ……

再如“Traveling Abroad(出国之旅)”的开头可以是:If you have an opportunity to travel abroad, why not consider Singapore?

4. 倒叙式开头
在有的文章,特别是叙事类的文章中,可以采用倒叙的写作手法,先写出事件的结果,再陈述过程。

如“Catching Thieves (捉贼)”的开头可以这样写:I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me? Let me tell you. It’s a ... story.




作文结尾的种方式

1.自然结尾,点明主题
随着文章的结束,文章自然而然地结尾。

如“Helping the Policeman (帮助警察)”的结尾可以是:The two children were praised by the police and they felt happy.
再如“The Tortoise and the Hare(龟兔赛跑)” 的结尾可以是:When the hare got to the tree, the tortoise had already been there。

2. 首尾呼应,升华主题
在文章的结尾可以用含义较深的话点明主题,深化主题,起到“画龙点睛”的效果。

如“I Love My Hometown(我爱家乡)”的结尾可以是:I love my hometown, and I am proud of it.

3. 反问结尾,引起深思
这种方式的结尾虽然形式是问句,但意义却是肯定的,而且具有一定的强调作用,可引起他人的深思

如 “Learning English can give us a lot of pleasure (学英语能为我们带来许多乐趣)” 的结尾可以是:If we learn English well, we can …Don’t you think learning English is great fun?

4. 表达祝愿,阐述愿望
这种方式的结尾常出现在书信或演讲稿的文体中,表示对他人的祝福或对将来的展望等。

如“A Letter to the Farmers(给农民们的一封信)”的结尾可以是:I hope the farmers' life will be better and better.

另外,书信的结尾常有以下形式的祝福语:Best wishes;I wish you a merry Christmas and a happy new year;I wish you have a good time等。






好作文常用的句型和连接词

常用连接词:
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…
And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系的:What is more, Besides
3.表转折对比关系的:However, but
Although+clause(从句),On the one hand… On the other hand… Some…, while others…
4.表因果关系的:Because, As ,So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5.表换一种方式表达:In other words
6.表进行举例说明:For example,句子;For instance,句子;
7.表陈述事实:In fact
8.表达自己观点: In my opinion
9.表总结:In a word. In summary

文中正确使用两三个好的句型
如:宾语从句、状语从句、动名词做主语等。
宾语从句举例:I believe Tianjin will be more beautiful and prosperous.
状语从句举例:If everyone does something for the environment, our hometown will become clean and beautiful.
动名词做主语举例:Reading books in the sun is bad for our eyes.
It's bad for our eyes to read books in the sun.

常用状语从句句型
(1)时间:when, not…until, as soon as
(2)目的:so that+从句; to do(为了)
(3)结果:so…that+从句, too…to do(太……以至于……)
(4)条件:if, unless(除非), as long as(只要)
(5)让步:though, although, even though, even if ,no matter what/when/where/who/which/how
(6)比较:as…as…, not so…as…, than

1. 重点句型
(1)It is said that + 句子 据说… It is reported that + 句子 据报道…
(2)There is no need to do 没必要做…
(3) It’s adj for sb to do 做…对某人来说…
(4)so /such… that … 如此… 以至于… too … to do 太… 而不能…
(5)not…until… 直到…才… 例:I didn’t go to bed until my mother came back。
(6)The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子 … 的原因是…
(7)The reason why he got angry was that she told him a lie. ( 他生气的原因是她对他说了谎。)
(8)That is why + 句子 那是…的原因
(9)That is because + 句子 那是因为…
(10)as we all know, +句子 据我们所知
(11) it is generally/ publicly known / considered that…, 众所周知

2. 提建议
I suggest / advice that you should do 我建议你做…
If I were you, I would do… 我要是你的话,我会做…
It’s best to do 最好做…
had better (not) do 最好(不)做
how about / what about doing …怎么样?
I think you should do 我认为你应该…
Why not do / why don’t you do…? 为什么不…

3. 努力做…
try to do努力做…
try one’s best to do = do one’s best to do 竭尽全力做…
do what sb can (do ) to do 尽力做…

4. 表示喜欢和感兴趣
like / love doing
enjoy doing
be fond of doing 喜欢做…
prefer to do A rather than do B 宁愿做A也不愿做B
be interested in doing = show/ take great interest in n / doing

5. 表示想/希望
want to do = would like to do 想做…
hope to do 希望做…
expect to do 期待着做…
wish to do 希望做…
consider doing 考虑做…

6. 打算做… / 计划做…
plan to do 打算做… be going to do 打算做… decide to do 决定做…
make up one’s mind to do 下定决心做…

7. 只加doing 作宾语的动词
finish 完成/ practice 练习 / suggest建议 / consider 考虑 / mind 介意 / enjoy 喜欢doing
look forward to doing 盼望做…
keep on doing 坚持做…
dream of doing 梦想做…
can’t help doing 情不自禁地做…
keep / stop / prevent sb. from doing 阻止某人做…
be busy (in ) doing be busy with + 名词 忙于做…
spend time / money (in )doing spend time / money on + 名词 花费时间做…
have fun / have a good time / enjoy oneself doing 玩得开心
have trouble / have problem / have difficulty (in) doing 或 with + 名词 做…有困难


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