近5年高考英语书面表达考情分析及真题范文点睛

一、考情分析

二、备考建议

1. 积累基本词汇和句式，尤其是简单基本句式，写好简单句。

2. 背诵课文段落和范文，学会模仿一些高级句式和表达。

3. 增强审题训练。

4. 坚持一周一篇或两篇应用文写作。

5. 练习书写，达到整洁美观的程度。

三、全国卷五年真题汇编

1 .假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：1. 写信目的；2. 个人优势；3. 能做的事情。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 结束语已为你写好。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer for the Chinese Painting Exhibition which will be held in your art gallery. I think I am qualified for this job, because I have learned Chinese painting since childhood. Besides, I am fluent in both Chinese and English, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings. If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer, I can show visitors around the gallery and get them to know more about Chinese painting.

I would be very grateful if you could offer me the opportunity. I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达要求写一封申请信，属于书信应用文。1.审题立意本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写申请信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在时。2.谋篇布局书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段写个人优势和能做的事，最后一段总结。3. 关键词和句子根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和句子有：volunteer，a Chinese Painting Exhibition，advantages，I am good at…，I can help with.../I’ll devote myself to…。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误，并增加一些细节和过渡性的词汇，如First of all，Besides，to begin with，moreover，as for me，Last but not least等，使全文衔接自然，语义流畅。

【点睛】

本文开门见山，表达了写信的目的；之后详细介绍了个人的优势和能做的事情，详略得当，内容完整，同时使用了高级词汇和高级句子。高级词汇：be qualified for，be fluent in，be beneficial for等；高级句式：because I have learned Chinese painting since childhood此处使用了原因状语从句。which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings.使用了非限制性定语从句。If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer, I can show visitors around the gallery and get them to know more about Chinese painting.使用了条件状语从句。

2 .你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括:1. 人物简介；2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。注意:1. 词数100左右；2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】

The person I respect

We have a lot of respectable people around us. They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders. As for me, my father is the person I respect most. My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much. He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work.

When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely. He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students. So, in my mind my father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛。

第一步：审题体裁：应用文。时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总分法。要求：1.人物简介：2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。

第二步：列提纲（重点短语）As for me；spare some time；listen to me patiently;

第三步：连词成句1.As for me, my father is the person I respect mostly.2.He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work.3.My father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇1.表示文章结构顺序：介绍人物；阐述原因2.表示并列补充关系：As for; and; but; So

第五步：润色修改

【点睛】

范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯。复合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多的高端句式，如定语从句：My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much；非谓语动词：He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students；时间状语从句：When I come across the problem of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely…等。文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。

3 .上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括:1. 农场情况；2. 采摘过程；3. 个人感受注意:1. 词数100左右；2. 题目已为你写好。

题目:My Weekend

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【答案】

My Weekend

Organized by the student union, a group of volunteers went to Hope Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last weekend. The farm is situated at the foot of a mountain, the sky is blue and the air is fresh. We were attracted by the beautiful scenery. There are different kinds of fruit trees as well as a variety of animals.

On arriving, we saw red ripe peaches hanging on the tree. Using baskets and ladders,We first picked the ones that were most beautiful in color, then those that were ripe and soft.I couldn’t wait to take a bite, and the sweet juice went down my throat.

I was grateful for this opportunity to get close to nature. Not only would I be able to experience fruit picking, but I could also feast on the sweetness!

【解析】

【详解】

第一步：根据提示可知，上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动。内容包括：1. 农场情况；2. 采摘过程；3. 个人感受。

第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：pick peaches, is situated, beautiful scenery, fruit trees ,a variety of animals, Using baskets and ladders,take a bite, be grateful for, get close to nature, feast on the sweetness.

第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。本文用一般现在时和一般过去时。第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Organized by the student union, a group of volunteers went to Hope Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last weekend. 和Using baskets and ladders运用了非谓语动词；We first picked the ones that were most beautiful in color, then those that were ripe and soft. 运用了定语从句；Not only would I be able to experience fruit picking, but I could also feast on the sweetness!运用了连词not only…but…和倒装句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

4 .假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:1. 剧情简介；2. 指导内容；3. 商定时间地点。注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 结束语已为你写好。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】

Dear Miss Evans,

How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook.

We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details?

Given your busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look forward to your early reply. Best regards!

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，请求外教Miss Evans对于《the Steamboat》改编短剧的支持。

【详解】

第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。结构：总分总法第一段说明写这封邮件的目的；第二段详细说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内容细节问题；第三段表达感谢，并期待早日得到回复。

第二步:列提纲（重点词组）write to；according to ；combine ；adaption ；challenge；attached to ；convenient

第三步：连词成句，根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

第五步：润色修改

【点睛】

范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details? 这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

5 .假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括:1. 比赛信息；2. 赛前准备；3. 表达期待。注意:1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】

Dear Chris,

I’m writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month. The match will take place in our school gym on the afternoon of July 4^th. We will play against the team from HongXing High School. In order to win the match, we should get fully prepared and practice hard. So from tomorrow, we need to train for two hours after school every day. Please come to the school gym at 6:30 pm from Monday to Friday.

You’re an excellent player. With you on the team, we are confident that we can win the game. Let’s try hard together!

Cheers,

Li Hua

【解析】

今年的书面表达沿袭近几年的体裁，仍旧是应用文。本次书面表达要求考生写一封邮件告知队友有关比赛的信息。本篇书面表达是一封告知信。首先要告知写信目的；然后简明扼要地告知排球比赛的时间、地点以及赛前的准备事项，注意事件信息的三要素：时间、地点、人物，要交代清楚；第三则要表达对队友的期待和鼓励。

【点睛】

本文内容完整，详略得当，并运用了高级句式。I’m writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month.宾语从句；In order to win the match不定式作目的状语。文章语言流畅，上下文转换自然。

6 .假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括：

1. 时间；

2. 活动安排；

3. 欢迎他表演节目。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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【答案】

Dear Allen,

How is everything going? Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall. And I’m writing to invite you to join us.

The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

【解析】

今年的书面表达要求考生写邮件，告知英国朋友音乐节的情况。

【详解】首先确定提纲。先介绍写作目的，之后介绍音乐节的时间、活动安排等具体信息，最后欢迎他表演节目。第二，根据提纲，确定关键词语，如：How is everything going? a music festival，in the school hall，The opening ceremony等。第三，注意选用合适的连接词将各要点串联起来。

【点睛】本文内容完整，详略得当。并使用了高级句式。如：You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.定语从句。提升了文章档次。

7 .假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件。内容包括：

（1）到达时间；（2）合适的礼物；（3）餐桌礼仪。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【答案】

Dear Terry,

How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the Chinese customs, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.

Firstly, I would like to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional culture. Secondly, if I were you, I would bring some gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own country. Besides, table manners are also what you should pay attention to. For example, you are not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. Instead, laying them on your dish is a smart choice.

Hopefully, these suggestions will be helpful for you.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文是一篇书信类应用文写作。餐桌礼仪也是考生比较熟悉的话题。成文时注意以下几点：一、内容要点要齐全1．到达时间；2．合适的礼物；3．餐桌礼仪。二、时态：主要用一般现在时和将来时；三、人称：二、三人称。四、注意使用恰当的高级词汇、短语或句型，以提高作文的水平；五、适当使用一些连接词和插入语，使文章表达自然、流畅。点睛：本文虽然看起来比较容易，但学生真正动起笔来，还是比较困惑的。原因为：1.看起来中国餐桌礼仪很熟悉，但内容很多，一时间不知道该写什么；2.100单词左右，写出到达时间；合适的礼物；餐桌礼仪三个内容，信息量大，选择有困难；应对方法：近年来高考写作的命题常用的思想就是高起点低落点。高起点题目很高，中国文化，中国故事，中国礼仪等等，但最终都把它们落在应用文的框架里，这就是低落点。写这样的作文，一定要注意不能写过于具体的内容，要找最重要的，最熟悉的写，不要面面俱到，中国餐桌礼仪内容太多，100单词无法写。找重点，以点带面。但选择重要内容本身就是一种能力。

8 .假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信，内容包括：1. 学校的体育场馆；2. 主要的运动项目；3. 你喜欢的项目。注意：1. 词数100左右：2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】

Dear Peter,

I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.

To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, I’m intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.

All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】

本题作文为提纲式作文，形式依然是书信，即给英国朋友Peter介绍学校体育运动情况，属于学校生活话题。这一话题贴合学生生活的实际，学生并不陌生，有话可说。首先可以介绍学校的体育场馆，场馆的位置，大小，开放时间等等。然后简要介绍学校主要开设的体育项目有哪些，可挑选一到两个做详细介绍，如学生的活动时间，活动形式，以及此类活动的好处等。再次简要分析自己喜欢的体育项目是什么，并简单分析喜欢的原因，自己从中得到的益处等。文章可主要采用一般现在时态，第一人称的方式来写。

9 .你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together，内容包括：

(1)短片内容：学校的发展；

(2)放映时间、地点；

(3)欢迎对短片提出意见。

注意：

(1)词数100左右；

(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【答案】

One possible version:Boys and girls,

I have good news for you. The English filmGrowing Togethermade by our teachers and some senior students will be displayed this weekend. It shows us the whole history of school’s development, which is I think the attraction to us. If you are curious about the history of our school or concerned about its future, you mustn’t miss this excellent opportunity! Besides, all your suggestions and comments about this film will be welcome.

It will be displayed in the School Film Hall, from 9:00 am to 10:00 am, June 9th, Saturday.

That’s all. Thank you.

The Students Union

June 8, 2018

【解析】

【详解】英语书面通知的时态应该以一般将来时为主，多使用被动语态、简单句。在通知中不应当过度的使用较复杂的词语和读起来拗口的句子。第二个注意点：层次一定要清晰，一个层次要表达一件事情，使人看起来一目了然。

10 .假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.展览时间、地点；2.展览内容。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】

Dear Henry，

I'm very delighted to write a letter to tell you something about Chinese paper-cutting exhibition，which will start on June 20 in our school lecture hall and last for a week．As is well-known to us all，Chinese paper-cutting is famous all over the world and I'm sure you will be interested in it，so I plan to invite you to pay a close visit．The exhibition is a collection of works created by some famous paper-cutting artists in China．During the activity，I will show you around our school and this is a good chance for you to enjoy yourself and learn more about Chinese traditional culture．

Would you please have a look at the exhibition with me？I'd appreciate it if you could accept my invitation．I'm looking forward to receiving your reply as soon as possible．

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇提纲类作文。首先审题，这篇文章要求假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.展览时间、地点；2.展览内容。其次选用正确的人称和时态，用一般将来时、第一人称来写。然后写出单个句子，使用正确的连词，连句成段。具体来说，写这篇文章时，要注意文中给出的细节都要包括，不要遗漏。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【点睛】

本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的复合句。例如：使用了定语从句I'm very delighted to write a letter to tell you something about Chinese paper-cutting exhibition，which will start on June 20 in our school lecture hall and last for a week．和宾语从句As is well-known to us all，Chinese paper-cutting is famous all over the world and I'm sure you will be interested in it，so I plan to invite you to pay a close visit．

11 .假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：球队活动；报名方式及截止日期。注意：词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【答案】

Dear Eric，

I was informed that our school Ping­pong Team is looking for new members among us students. I know you show great fancy in ball games, especially ping­pong.

As you know, playing ping­pong can not only build up your body but also shape your character. Additionally, it can help you make more friends, which is essentially beneficial to you.

Would you like to join? If so, please go to sign up at the Student Union office, which is on the second floor of the Teaching Building. You can go there any time this Saturday afternoon. If you want me to accompany you, please let me know. I will be available any time.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

由要点可知，邮件是邀请对方报名参加乒乓球队，所以主体时态为一般将来时和一般现在时。人称以第三人称为主(介绍乒乓球运动的好处)，一、二人称为辅。在写作时要注意邀请信的交际性，比如：开篇点明写信目的，最后期待回复。同时还要注意根据提示内容进行合理发挥。

【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：it can help you make more friends, which is essentially beneficial to you.这句话运用了which引导的定语从句使用了一些固定词组，如 show great fancy in; sign up; look forward to等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

12 .假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：（1）时间和地点；（2）内容：学习唐诗；（3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【答案】

Dear Leslie,

I am very happy that you have made great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested in Chinese culture. Now I'll tell you the next learning programme. On July 20, we are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty which you are interested in in the Lecture Hall. As a foreign learner, it is difficult for you to understand the true meaning and the culture of them. Therefore, before class, you can read some books related to the history of the Tang Dynasty to better appreciate the poems.

Be sure to go to the Lecture Hall on time. You cannot miss the wonderful poems.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。

【详解】

随着时代的发展，电子邮件越来越受广大中学生的欢迎，所以写电子邮件是中学生经常做的事，这种形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们感到熟悉。根据提示可知，本篇为一封信件；假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。考生成文时应注意：1. 要点要齐全：（1）时间和地点；（2）内容：学习唐诗；（3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。2. 时态：以一般现在时为主；3. 人称：第二人称为主；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。

【点睛】

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如宾语从句I am very happythatyou have made great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested in Chinese culture.定语从句On July 20, we are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynastywhichyou are interested in in the Lecture Hall.非谓语动词Therefore, before class, you can read some booksrelated tothe history of the Tang Dynasty to better appreciate the poems.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

13 .假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：1.阐明写信事由；2.征求建议；3.表示感谢。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】

Dear Chris,

Word came that our school is going to hold a class meeting whose topic is related to Chinese traditional customs. Because this activity will be presented on the English website, I sincerely want you to offer me some advice.

As far as we know, there is a huge cultural difference between China and the western countries. In order to get more clicks, you’d better tell me which Chinese culture you westerners prefer. What’s more, if I want to decorate my website with some Chinese elements, what should I do? Knowing you are interested in China, I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles.

If possible, you can reply to me as soon as possible. I will take your advice into consideration. I really appreciate your help.

Yours,

Li Hua

14 .你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：1. 分析优势与不足；2. 提出学习建议。注意：1. 词数100左右;2. 题目和首句已为你写好。

【答案】

one possible version:

Be smart online learners

Network learning has increasingly become an important means for people to acquire knowledge and solve problems.But being smart online learners has its advantages and disadvantages.

First of all, as smart online learners, we can make full use of the most extensive educational resources to broaden the horizon. Besides, We can take the initiative in our study by ourselves without time and space limit.

Of course, these disadvantages are as follows.Faced with all kinds of information on the internet, We can't tell the difference between the true and the false, which may be harmful to our study and life. On the other hand, online learning itself has some imperfections, making it difficult for us not to be affected.

In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages and find a proper way to make our study more efficient.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛。1. 词汇积累充分利用：make full use of→ make the most of扩宽,丰富：broaden→ enrich各种各样：all kinds of→ varieties of不完美：imperfection→ defect2. 句式拓展合并简单句原句：In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages and find a proper way to make our study more efficient.拓展句：In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages ， finding a proper way to make our study more efficient.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] Faced with all kinds of information on the internet ,We can't tell the difference between the true and the false, which may be harmful to our study and life.（非谓语作状语和which引导的非限制性定语从句）[高分句型2]On the other hand ,online learning itself has some imperfections, making it difficult for us not to be affected.（现在分词作状语）

15 .你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1. 读报的经历；2. 喜爱的栏目；3. 期望和祝福。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式写字答题卡的相应位置作答。

Youthand Me

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【答案】

Youthand Me

It has been 10 years sinceYouthwas founded. In my memory, it isYouththat accompanies me through my whole high school. When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories. These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon. Besides, I even submitted my own fiction toYouth. Refused as I was, I still received some great encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a writer.

I do expectYouthcan publish more classic works and have a promising future.

【解析】

本文是一篇应用文，向校刊Youth表达自己的经历，并送上自己的祝福。1.词汇积累建立：found→establish沮丧的：upset→depressed得到：receive→obtain赏析：enjoy→appreciate2.句式拓展同义句改写原句：These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon.拓展句：Not only can these stories relieve my stress, but also they can broaden my horizon.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] Refused as I was, I still received some great encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a writer. (运用了as引导的让步状语从句还运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)