高考英语作文so easy----利用百句熟诵中的句型写2021年全国新高考2卷作文

发布于 2021-11-29 21:07 ,所属分类:知识学习综合资讯

2021年高考英语全国新高考2卷应用文写作,既是意料之外又是情理之中。意料之外是李华竟然没来,可能李华太累了,也该歇歇了吧,上一次李华没来还是2014年的事儿呢。那一年也是给报社写投稿,十年后的我。情理之中就是题目依然在高考要求考生用应用文解决一件事情的范围之内,无论它是写信,写通知,写报道还是写投稿,都是在考查英语学科的核心素养。英语不仅是交流的工具,也是思维的工具,英语学习是学生接触其他文化、传播中国文化,促进思维能力进一步发展的过程。今年的这篇应用文,是向校刊 Youth 表达自己的经历,并送上自己的祝福。对于“百句”掌握熟练,已经有了各种体裁和语境表达素材积累的同学们来说,简直就是信手拈来的“小菜一碟”。下面是本人化用“百句”句型写的一篇下水作文。

第一节(满分15分)

你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:

1.读报的经历;

2.喜爱的栏目;

3.期望和祝福。

注意:

1.写作词数应为80左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Youth and Me

How time flies! 35句)It has been 10 years since I began to read Youth. 67·It is Youth that makes mebrave enough to face all the stress. 67·By reading it, I enrich my knowledge and broaden myhorizons. More importantly, it promotes my confidence. 16句·)

When it comes to Youth, 39· what impresses me most is the column of China Corner, 95·where I can gain a deeper insight into Chinese history and culture. 6· What’s more, 14·it keeps me informed of what is happening in China. 74·

I sincerely hope that Youth is becoming more and more popular. 20·

第二节(满分25分)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE

The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise theywere planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chickenporridge(粥). They had watched their mother in the kitchen.There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.

The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jennafound the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned onthe second stove(炉)burner to heat up thefrying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread.The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw theburnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.

Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid(盖子)starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put outthe fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’ s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.

注意:

1.续写词数应为150左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.

The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.

2021年高考英语新高考全国2卷读后续写部分是双胞胎在母亲节早上给妈妈做早餐送惊喜的故事,内容贴近学生生活,情节生动,语言简洁,富含描写,表面是写惊喜,实则写家人间的爱。考生只要顺着故事线索,照应两个段首提示句,利用“百句”中积累的表情,语言,动作描写句型,挖掘出故事背后的价值观导向进行主题升华,就能写出不错的高考作文。根据续写部分第一段的首句,可以看出,在双胞胎失望的时候,父亲出现了。故事该如何发展?是批评还是鼓励?我们还得先看第二段开头句,孩子们端着早餐向妈妈献上母亲节惊喜。一般的理解该是在爸爸的帮助之下,完成这个惊喜。因此,第一段可描写双胞胎在父亲指导帮助下准备早餐的情节以及他们各自的心理和动作情况,既呼应原文又便于利用我们积累的素材句。第二段可描写母亲收到孩子们的早餐时的心情,肯定非常感动。这样,平时我们操练的“笑一笑,哭一哭,抱一抱”的描写法则就能派上用场了。

Asthe twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.

73句)The moment they spotted their father, the twins’ faces burned with embarrassment and they both dropped theirheads in shame. 47句)“What’s the matter?” Father asked in surprise.Jeff had to explain their plan to Father in a low voice.(61句)After hearing this, Father said, “Don’tpanic! Let me help you cook.” At that moment, Jenna and Jeff jumped to their feet 53句)and a wide excitement took hold of them. 3句)With the help of Father, it didn’t take long to finish the French toast and chicken porridge.76句) With everything settled ,31句)Father left the kitchen and tiptoed to the bedroom, 56句)promising to keep their secret.

The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.

They presented the breakfast and said “Happy mother’s day”.Mother froze with shock and looked at them in amazement. 58句)And then Mother said excitedly ,“It’s unbelievable! You can cook! This is the biggest surprise I have received.” After tasting it, Mother hugged the twins as tightly as possible and her eyes were filled with tears of gratitude.50句) So happywere the family that their smiles lit up the whole room. 25句)For Mother,it is an unforgettable mother’s day while for the twins and Father, it is a secret of love.98句)

附录:2021高考英语读后续写部分原文:

As the twins looked around them in dismay(沮丧地), their father appeared in the doorway. One look and he knew what they were up to.Seeing their crestfallen (垂头丧气的)faces, he told them to clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast for Mother.The twins cheered up and did as told. Within an hour, the kitchen was cleaned,and Father had made some egg sandwiches and cooked some oat porridge. Then he sneaked back to bed. The twins prepared the breakfast tray, adding a card theyhad made, and then carried the tray upstairs to their parents’ bedroom.

The twins woke their mother up by hugging her and yelling ‘Happy Mother’s Day,darling Mummy!’ Mother hugged the twins. Her eyes widened at the sight of thebreakfast tray. She shook Father who was pretending to snore. He feigned(假装)astonishment when he saw the breakfast.Mother bit into a sandwich and said it was the best she had ever tasted. Jeff immediately wanted to have a bite. Jenna caught her father’s eye and they winked at each other secretly.


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